by Rachel Schneider
Publisher: Saturday Books
Pub Date: May 12, 2024
Genre: Adult, Fantasy, Romance, Magic
Format: ARC
Source: Publisher
Book Links: Goodreads Amazon Bookshop
Even though she's not one of them, Brynn has spent her life among the
Alaha, training to be a guard and waiting for the chance to attend the annual
market hosted by the Kenta–the very same people who exiled her adopted
community to a life at sea. Going to the market is a rite of passage eagerly
anticipated by all young guards, but Brynn does not anticipate breaking a
century-long peace treaty while there. Nor does she plan for the intense
encounter with an enemy soldier that now threatens to unwind the fragile
coexistence between their people–and everything Brynn once believed about
herself to be true.
Brynn's loyalty to the Alaha is tested when the truth of her identity is
brought to light by this soldier who's taken an oath to bring her back to where
she belongs. Narrowly escaping death on the violent high seas, Brynn's
connection to the Alaha is further tested when she learns about the world of
magic she's been denied. She was once certain of her fate and where she
belonged, but the dark, knowing eyes of this stranger have her questioning
everything, including her heart.
My Review: Erm... So I'm not sure what the hype is about this book.
I made it about 10 chapters in before I had to put it down and decide if I could pick it back up and finish it or mark it as a DNF.
The story up until then is so boring. The amount of errors makes it really hard to read at times too. Basically up to this point, the book has done nothing but give me a headache.
Kai is the leaders son and is choosing Brynn to be his wife. He wants her, his family is happy about the choice, and they'll lead this place together one day. He is pretty pushy about it and Brynn likes Kai but marriage wasn't on her list of things and the more Kai pushes the more I want to have words with him and they aren't kind ones.
Brynn seems to have the shitty end of the stick here. She was essentially adopted into the Alaha home. Training, excited to visit the market and just really just needs a chance in life. She seems to constantly get in trouble, a lot of them with Kai. Or perhaps trouble just follows her since when they finally get to visit the market she kind of breaks a peace treaty and now they want Alaha to send her back to them.
So far, I'm not impressed nor really care for any of the characters at all. They could use some work on personality traits and more development too.
After sometime, I did pick the book back up and tried to push through it. I did have to skip some chapters until I finally reached a point where the book somewhat redeemed itself. Around the 70% mark is when the book was finally interesting enough for me and started to grab and hold my attention, though I wasn't 100% sold on the story yet. There are still many things to be answered, development could use more work but it was getting there finally.
In the end, I did manage to finish the book. Is it worth all the hype around it? No. Its just another overhyped book that didn't make the cut for me. Not sure if I'll attempt the next book. There are things I want to know more about and get the answers to that hopefully the next book will be able to give and who knows maybe it's the next book that will make the series worth it to me. In the meantime I'll just leave it at this and perhaps I'll take a look at the second book down the line.












